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-The emotion they all rant about is in reality that simple verse of hope. Love it. :)

-This was very...Pessimistic. However I appreciated the realism and the last line was perfect. Well done =]

-This leaves something hauntingly empty to feel. Good work. :)

-beautiful, amazing, perfect...u get the gist of it. absolutely thrilling...compared to some of ur other works I read, its like viewing a master's painting and the others were like chicken scratches on a canvas. thanks for a beautiful piece

-sad. :( the emotion is well delivered and the message is really sad.

-You really developed the comparison between a relationship and a puzzle very well! I wouldn't have thought to describe it as a puzzle at first, but now I see the light. The very beginning seemed SO much like something I could compare to (the one about the crush that doesn't know you exist). A nicely thought out metaphor, in general, just one thing. I'm a stickler for grammar, and in one part, can't find it now, but you used "then" when it should have been "than". Just to let you know...

-I apologize for smiling at the second bullet but I couldn't help it, I can relate all too well. I actually quite enjoyed reading your thoughts, it was like taking a peek into someone elses life. Nice writing =]

-Very good poem! Wow, made me wanna cry! I've definitely been there and done that. Lonely place to be...but i guess you don't need me to tell you that. sorry. but you did a very great job at capturing the way it feels in this poem. It kinda brought it all back to me and i was instantly there again. Fantastic! That is definitely a difficult thing to do in writing. :) Keep up the good work!

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it's funny how these strangers thoughts mean so much more to me than the friends that tell me the same.